on Friday bruce came to our school and he was talking about 1 of his books he made and it was called doodle bug. when i walked into the hall i was like wow i thort it was harry potter in reel life. and on Monday we had a go and i put doodle bug in a good place.
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Hi dylan its me Noah Pardy, I liked how you drawed those cool drawings about doodle bug, next time you could make the people not have stickman arms.
ReplyDeletehello dylan I like the way you Left no space on your price of paper I also like drawing too. next time you shod zoom out on your pictures. great job��
ReplyDeletethanks khan and noah
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